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História Loving LiLy
Escrita por:
thagirlwitcurls
Sinopse:
After Alice died, she left a child. And she didn't think to tell her bestfriend, who loved her with all his heart, about this child. He would have wished so bad that it was his, but she didn't love him back. So he goes on with his life. He turns bitter and has no more love. But one day, it all changes.
After Alice died, she left a child. And she didn't think to tell her bestfriend, who loved her with all his heart, about this child. He would have wished so bad that it was his, but she didn't love him back. So he goes on with his life. He turns bitter and has no more love. But one day, it all changes.
Iniciado
Atualizada
Idioma Inglês
Visualizações 275
Favoritos 10
Comentários 15
Listas de leitura 3
Palavras 5.085
Concluído Não
Categorias Histórias Originais
Tags Love/romance
Atualizada
Idioma Inglês
Visualizações 275
Favoritos 10
Comentários 15
Listas de leitura 3
Palavras 5.085
Concluído Não
Categorias Histórias Originais
Tags Love/romance
Aviso legal
Todos os personagens desta história são de minha propriedade intelectual.
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